Hi [Company name], I'd like a refund for [item], order [order number]. It arrived and did not match the listing. I'd rather return it for a refund than keep it. Let me know the next steps. Tell me if I should ship it back or if a photo is enough. Thanks, [Your name]
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How to ask for a refund and actually get one
Three tones for a refund request that leads with the details, not the frustration.
When to use this
Something arrived broken, wrong or not as described, and the refund has not come. Do not open with frustration. Open with the order details. Otherwise support asks for information that you could have led with, and everything slows down.
Three variants
Same situation, three different stances.
Hi [Company name], I've had good experiences ordering from you. So I was surprised when [item], order [order number], arrived in the wrong condition. I'd like a refund this time, not a replacement. I'm happy to send a photo or return it. Use whatever makes this quickest to sort out. Thanks for your help, [Your name]
Hi [Company name], Order [order number], for [item], arrived faulty. I'm requesting a full refund, not store credit or a replacement. Under consumer protection rules I'm entitled to this. Please process it without a lengthy back and forth. Confirm the refund and a timeline within five business days. [Your name]
Why this works
- It leads with the order number and item, so the reply does not start with a request for information you already have.
- It says "refund" and nothing else. That leaves no room for a store credit offer.
- The firm version names a real deadline, so support has something concrete to act on.
Before you send
What to change.
- [Company name]
- The retailer or seller.
- [item]
- What you ordered.
- [order number]
- Your order or reference number.
- [Your name]
- Sign with your own name.
Questions
Fair questions, straight answers.
Should I mention consumer protection rules if I'm not sure they apply?
Mention them only if you are fairly sure. A wrong reference can weaken the request. A specific description of what went wrong usually works without it.
What if they offer store credit instead of a refund?
Say once, plainly, that you want a refund. Most retailers respect a clear preference and do not push back twice.
Where Beemy fits
Beemy can draft a reply like this when a refund request needs chasing, in your own voice. It holds the draft for your one-tap approval before it sends. Live today on Gmail.
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